No way. You can't let any amount of plagiarism slide, whether it's intentional or not. This is put together by someone who has no idea how to collate and evaluate sources, much less construct an argument, and especially at the undergraduate level a professor would be more interested in whether or not this stuff is done correctly than whether the argument is interesting or has any merit. There's so many claims in these two paragraphs that need citations, it would go straight in the garbage. And don't even get me started about the total absence of academic style and the awkward sentence construction. I can't remember what the running joke about the community college classes is based on, but even that is giving him too much credit. He has obviously never written a research paper, and probably also never read one.
It does tick all the boxes for an incel manifesto, though. The obsessive regurgitation of half-understood terminology from stuff he's read over and over, the bitching about women a propos of nothing, the self-aggrandizing "we" as a worm who's never accomplished anything in his life imagines himself to be part of a master race destined for greatness.
We should probably be worried at this point, but it's just too fucking funny that he posted this thinking it would silence his detractors.
dude, it's just a rough draft. I'm not at the editing stage yet. It'll be much cleaner when all is said and done. The book will have citations. Besides, as long as I get it in front of scientifically literate people they will know already that all the claims I make are verified.
